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The Newcomer: Page 03 by JM-Henry The Newcomer: Page 03 by JM-Henry
Updates on Saturdays, just because.

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The Main Site:
thelostlandcomic.com
Sites still in the works, but will improve along with me. :) Look out for the 'Terms' section for all the need-to-know info as well as some fun stuff.

Other Small Bases:
Smackjeeves

The Duck

Go on, they won't bite.
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Nhiloe Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
:3 this looks really really cool!
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JM-Henry Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!
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mayshing Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Professional Filmographer
OK crit time:
This is a wonderful page but this is also where there's a major problem. ^^b
The main character's introduction is a bit weak here in panel connection. When I first read it, I have no clue where the main character comes from, I have to read it the second time to see "OH! At panel 2 there's this little black image that looks like a human that's VERY close to another black shadow shape of the building. That's the main character's first silhouette introduction!"

For a comic/manga, you want it to be more obvious than that. You used this technique several times and it's not working that well because the transition jumps too much. From a small silhouette to a crop of a face is not a good transition, similar details must be provided in a transitional drawing between panels.

You need to indicate more strongly on the character that's coming up on the next panel, and he really needs to be presented in the third panel ALSO for the forth panel's crop to work, you can't suddenly remove him from the shot and leave only two irrelevant soldier talking, he is the star of the show, the more important guy, the camera needs to keep him in the picture. Don't overplay the mysteriousness of the show.
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mayshing Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Professional Filmographer
really nice b/w relationships. :D
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JM-Henry Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
The establishing point was fun to do, the bottom half was a nightmare at the time. Glad it worked out in the end. :D
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Wardealth Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012
Very good artowkr ^.^
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:iconjm-henry:
JM-Henry Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! :)
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Wardealth Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012
^.^
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Sokkhue Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very impressive! I was stunned when I saw the first panel.
And nice use of tones
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JM-Henry Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
To tell the truth, I'm still surprised it turned out so well, page 3 was a nightmare to work on in the beginning.
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