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| The LostlandThe adventures of four travelers unknowingly wrapped up in a chain of events, all leading to one man's plot to turn the world on it's head. Action, laughs, and mystery all packed into one Post-Apoc world. Updates Saturdays Also check out: The Lostland Codex MangaMagazine.net Comments Done criting upto the most current page. I will keep watch for you.
If you are willing I can direct some of my viewers to your work to view and see my crit as well. That will help both you and them to grow.  That reminds me, what would be the best point to re-work the pages?
a. Now. Take a break from posting and smarten these up b. End chapter, then work on them c. Keep going and re-work at some point in the far future b. end chapter, then work on them.
You don't have to rework them if you don't want to, if you are only keeping them online and don't plan to make profit from them, nor submit them somewhere. If you do plan to submit them somewhere thought, or print them, then I suggest go back to some of these pages to fix them up or redraw some areas.  This was all strangely fun to read, and enlightening, thanks May. Also, if it'll help, then you can definitely do that.
Hopefully my later pages will show a bit more promise(maybe not 17-19 though  ). thanks for taking it so well. I hope the suggestion can serve you and not sound too harsh. ^^I still have a lot to adjust for my own pages too. Manga is a constant improvement thing. I suggest looking at Clamp's manga pages they have excellent layout, they are currently one of my ref, Berserk is also another ref of mine. I keep them close. |
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